Block Tests: LA
Why does the school insist on calling them block tests when they’re not even in a block anymore? I think Continual Assessment or Common Test sounds fine too.
So anyway, for Language Arts, today’s question was:
“A world without conflict is an impossible dream.” Discuss.
Can’t remember what the last part was, but it’s always got the same meaning, so yeah.
What I Wrote
- Conflict is part of human nature. You can curb it, but you can’t deny it. Society needs an outlet for this repressed tendency, and thus will have major conflicts e.g. war.
- I can’t believe I actually quoted playground fights as evidence.
- I wrote something about St. Augustine. And I think that was it.
- Conflict brings progress, advancement and evolution – biologically required? Seen in nature?
- Cited horrible example: A-bomb. Even as I was writing I knew it was screwed up, but no time to think and I was stressed.
- Conflict breaks up the monotony of life, and thus humans will be loath to get rid of it because life would be boring without it.
- Short, no substantiation – just a point, because I had 10 minutes left to write a page (or I would have only 2 pages and no essay at all)
I kept debating whether to focus only on big huge conflicts like World Wars or if smaller conflicts counted as well. This took up a lot of time and left me more confused than ever.
Mistakes I Made
- Really bad evidence. Not enough evidence. Evidence holds no weight.
- Wasted 15 minutes of time trying to figure out what the hell to write…
- …and another ten staring at my blank paper trying to make my arguments make sense.
- Didn’t follow paragraph structure that the teachers wanted.
- Introduction had unnecessary sentences – will affect my language mark pretty badly.
I Think I’ll Get
- Language: Band 2 if I’m lucky, maybe Band 3. Which is not good, because language has always been what pulls my scores up.
- The “Reasoning and Logic” Bit: I’m hoping for at least Band 3 but I have a feeling that it’ll drop to 4.
pleasepleasepleaseletmegetatleast21markspleasethankyou
What I Should Do To Improve
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Read about boring topics in the paper. Read all the articles in the Review section instead of the funny ones on language and America.








